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Monday, February 17, 2020

SPFBO Finalist: Spark City by Robert J. Power (reviewed by Lukasz Przywoski, David Stewart, Justine Bergman and Mihir Wanchoo)


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AUTHOR INFORMATION: Robert J. Power is a fantasy writer hailing from Wicklow, Ireland, and #1 Best Selling author of the Spark City Cycle and The Dellerin Tales.

His writing career started out of idle necessity when he began spending his nights writing by his father's bedside while working as his carer.


When he isn't writing, Robert enjoys the romance of music and performs as the lead singer, guitarist, and premier songwriter in Army of Ed. A lover of the outdoors and recreation, Robert is an avid football supporter and cheers on his local team Bray Wanderers. He currently resides in Wicklow with his wife, Jan, and his beloved rescues animals.


OFFICIAL BOOK BLURB: The Hunt is Coming. Despite his warriors’ lineage, Erroh would rather waste his potential stumbling alone from one tavern to the next, drinking and gambling. Fate, however, has greater plans for him.

After decades of peace, a great war draws near, and though he doesn’t know it, he is standing in the way of the first wave. What is more, and very much to his dismay, he’s about to find out he’s not entirely alone either. But Erroh has a plan, a simple plan.


It’ll never work.


CLASSIFICATION: Sword&Sorcery with elements of a thriller.

FORMAT: Kalanon's Rising was self-published by the author in August 2016 as the first book in the Spark City Cycle series. Winner of the SpecFicNZ Novel Competition. It's available in an e-book, paperback and hardcover format from most retailers. Cover design by Damonza.

The book counts 694 pages and is divided into 45 numbered chapters. 

OVERVIEW/ANALYSIS 



JUSTINE

Spark City was a strange read for me, as there were aspects that I found alluring, and others I had a truly difficult time grappling. I found the writing itself to be vivid, immersive, and near flawless, however, several of the machanics Power uses prevented me from connecting with the content like I had hoped. For instance, the jarring point of view swaps right at the start of the book forced me to reread to understand who I should be focusing on. There's always a learning curve when starting a new series, and this confusion made it almost impossible for me to find a rhythm, which sadly lingered.

At times it felt like I was reading a slice-of-life, then others an action-adventure, both of which I enjoy, so no complaints there. Sparse worldbuilding leads to more focus on the characters, which unfortunately fell a bit flat for me. I'm always a fan of flawed, snarky characters, and Erroh seems to fit that bill quite well. Yet while originally refusing to embrace the lifestyle set before him, his erratic and naive behavior quickly prevented me from relating to him, which is unfortunate, because character-centric stories are easily my favorite types of reads.


I personally didn't enjoy Spark City as much as I thought I would, but I can definitely see the appeal for a different audience. Its curious structure, lack of an apparent concrete plot, and pacing issues interfered with my overall enjoyment, which could have easily been avoided if the character development was stronger. I’ve seen others really appreciate this book, so it’s worth giving it a try to see if it’s for you.

LUKASZ

Spark City makes a good initial impression. Elegant cover and intriguing title coupled with generally positive reviews made me eager to read it. I liked the opening chapters as they efficiently set the tone and introduced Erroh - a snarky and superficially likable protagonist. Soon, though, my enthusiasm started to wane. 


Plot & Structure

Spark City has a strange, unbalanced, structure. The first part, The Cull, is long (almost half of the book) and entertaining. The Cull is the process allowing females to secure a mate. Each male undergoes a series of questions and feats. The second part of the book is shorter. I would describe it as “on the road again”. Two characters get the time to know each other, learn to rely on each other, build trust and foundations for a passionate relationship. Soon enough, though, it turns into a vengeance story. Things culminate with an impossible battle, mayhem, and tragedy, plus a cliffhanger ending. Nothing feels balanced here. The plot? I’m sure there is one, but I’ll be damned if I can find it. 


Characters 

On the surface, Erroh is likable. He comes from an impressive line of warriors, but contrary to his parents he has no interest in fame or glory - he prefers to drink and play cards. He lacks any social grace which leads to misunderstandings, unnecessary tension, and humorous consequences. 


I have a soft spot for blunt, snarky and socially awkward protagonists but Erroh’s behavior irked me. It shifts from clumsy through pompous and arrogant to feral and delusional. He can’t read people, and all those hot girls confuse him. He thinks they loathe him while in reality, they all have a crush on him. 


Because he likes Lea most, he treats her worse than others. Simple. When he’s stressed by hard trials of The Cull (that should secure him a mate) he thinks of girls as of witches, bitches or whores. Ok, I get it. Erroh is young, emotional, and has no experience with women. But this doesn’t give him the right to reduce them in such a way. 


And now, the girls. Instead of describing the depth of their characterization, I’ll use the quote:



“I’m sure you like anything you can get,” hissed Roja dropping any pretence of cordiality. What marvellous event occurred on their day off to cause such hostility, wondered Erroh. Please ladies, do go on. “Well, at least I’m not a whore!” shouted Silvia. “You’re a little bit of a whore,” countered Roja.

They hiss, glare, cry and desire poor Erroh who’s too dumb to realize it. But then he goes on a road with his new mate and they have to learn to rely on each and share experiences they finally fall in true and pure love. Color me shocked. 


Villains? Don’t even ask. They’re all cartoonish, flat caricatures.


I find the characterization weak, inconsistent, and unconvincing. 



Point of view

Head-hopping isn’t a myth or an empty phrase repeated by grumpy book bloggers. It compromises my reading experience and pulls me out of the flow of the narrative. Unless it’s done well. Alas, in Spark City it’s done badly. Frequent POV switches felt jarring and irked me. I know that rules are for fools but breaking them well requires a lot of skill. It the narrative was attempting omniscient it failed miserably with limited head-hopping and POV-slips.



Setting

The setting is atmospheric and effective. There’s not much attention paid to world-building but we get enough to follow the story and understand the context. It works fine for me as I’m not into detailed world-building.



Voice/tone

Erroh’s voice is snarky and enjoyable. I have no issues with it. I can’t say the same about Lea - her voice shifts from mature to emotional and immature (her diary). 


The tone changes depending on whose POV and when we are following. Basically, during the Cull the tone is humorous and conveys well emotions/states such as urgency, confusion, or anger. In later parts of the book, the tone becomes darker and desperate but even in the darkest moments, t doesn’t lose a dark sense of humor.



Timing/pacing

Spark City has no rhythm. Not a bad thing per se. It never drags. It rarely slows down to offer a breather from the hectic pace and Erroh’s misfortunes and misadventures. As long as you don’t stop to think things through, it’s weirdly addictive in a way action and comedy B-movies are. But once you stop and ask yourself what’s the point of it all things get tricky. 



In closing


Spark City is a quick and entertaining read that efficiently masks its issues with breakneck pacing, humor, over-the-topness, and outbursts of violence. It won’t satisfy more sophisticated readers, because it offers nothing new–it’s built on tired tropes (chosen one, coming-of-age, from anger to love, love from the first sight, and more). 


I didn’t like it, but I recognize its sales and entertainment potential. With some refinements (like another pass of proofreading, and, ideally structural editing) it should appeal to readers looking for a fast, self-indulging but weirdly addictive romp. 





MIHIR

OVERVIEW/ANALYSIS: Spark City has an enticing cover and a blurb which doesn’t give much away. I went in with high expectations as Booknest’s finalists are always interesting ones (for me at least).

The main story begins and is about Erroh, son of Magnus. An Alphaline who needs to test himself in the Cull and perhaps entice a female alphaline to select him and prove himself worthy of his lineage (even if it’s a dark & disturbing one). The story starts with the reader being dropped alongside Erroh who finds himself slowly facing many obstacles on his sojourn to the aforementioned titular city. The journey is a dark one as the reader finds out and when the Cull begins the reader is as clueless as Erroh.

This book was a bit of disjointed read for me, I’m usually not one to shy away from difficult books. But this one had too many confounding factors for my enjoyment. Firstly the main character of Erroh is a bit of a cipher. Usually, authors can get away with characters who are closed books but there has to be other promising things like plot or world-building or the character cast which will hold the reader’s attention. Here the author doesn’t deliver and we are faced with sullen, one tone Erroh and he’s not the most enticing protagonist.  Erroh often stumbles alongside females and then does a few other weird things. 

The world settings and the plot pace doesn’t help either. The world settings are very poorly explained and this is where I was a bit frustrated. The book is over 500 pages long and yet there was ample page count for the author to expound on the world and the magic system. But yet the author couldn’t or didn’t do the needful in my opinion. The book deals with the Cull for nearly half of the book and then goes on to other parts which deal with something else entirely. The rambling nature of the plot wasn’t helpful and further slowed the pace which was a bit glacial. 

Lastly, the characters, beginning with Erroh and the few others that we come across. Erroh isn’t explained entirely and his actions, as well as his behavior, are a bit weird. This is where the author could have written his POV in a better way, I feel this is where the book truly sunk in my opinion. The main character was more than a bit dull and especially uncharismatic. The secondary character cast isn’t any better, beginning with the other alphalines and the eventual villain. There’s not much depth provided to them and this was especially problematic given the page count.

All in all, I feel I’m being especially harsh on this title and I hope the author can forgive my bluntness. Over a period of years, the SPFBO completion has gone from strength to strength. Considering the level of competition this year, I found Spark City to be lacking that special bit which would make it stand out against the rest of the nine finalists.

CONCLUSION: Spark City, unfortunately, didn’t quite do much for me and for my colleagues as well. It’s a pity as it seemed that this would be a worthy finalist. However, to my dismay, that wasn’t the case. 




SPFBO Final Score




Friday, February 14, 2020

Tenth Anniversary Guest Post & Giveaway by M. R. Mathias

Hey FBC fans, it’s me, M.R. Mathias. It’s been a while, but I am honored to be able to pop in, make an announcement or two, and give away some Fantastica audiobook bundles.

First to the announcement, this July will mark the 10th Anniversary of the, The Sword and the Dragon - The Wardstone Trilogy Book One. (Which is also nearing the 10th anniversary of its FBC review) To celebrate, and since over the decade the trilogy sold over a million individual Kindle copies, we reformatted the interiors of all three titles and slapped on these amazing new covers by Jason McIntyre.

(https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B07F7H3D97)

If you are one of the many thousands of readers who enjoyed The Wardstone Trilogy in eBook, grab a set for your bookshelf. Or if you read The Sword and the Dragon, but not the rest of the trilogy, you should look at the reviews for books two and three. I wrote the whole thing back to back to back, knowing it was going to be a trilogy, and remain so. But I tried very hard to give each volume a fulfilling ending. Either way, now you can get the whole trilogy in these eye-catching paperbacks, or if you prefer eBook, The Complete Wardstone Trilogy (digital box set,) is now available via Kindle and Kindle Unlimited.

(https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B00FW72EDC)

Now to the giveaway.


(https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B078L9JVYZ/ )

Fantastica, is a recently completed four book series. Right before Christmas, the audiobook narration to the four-book collection dropped, and we were left with a whole bunch of free audible audio codes to the individual titles. The narrator, Will Hahn, was kind enough to put together 15 (10 US, 5 UK) four code bundles, so each winner will be able to get all four titles in the series, from their respective Audible store.

(https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B0753G9WBM)

I will leave it up to the fine folks at FBC to figure out who gets the prizes. Good Luck, and if you win, please take a moment to write an Audible or Amazon review.

*Note: In the unlikely event you don’t win, there is a huge free preview of book one, Taerak’s Void in Fantastica: The Complete Four Book Collection.

My newest project is a trilogy called Dragon Racers. It is a little different than my usual thing. More Steampunk or Gaslamp than traditional epic, but still with magic and dragons. (*grins and shrugs) Some of the story and characters are based on Chinese, Korean, and Vietnamese Mythology, and all in all it’s hopefully worthy of the good reviews it has so far received.

(https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B07NC939TR/)

On a personal note. I told you guys last year; my eyes are screen-fried, and I almost lost a foot to an infection brought on by diabetes. On top of that, I might have early onset Alzheimer’s, so you won’t see much more “new” material from me. I figure six completed series, five of which happen in the same world, is enough for one brain. I have self-published over three million words. I already have several hundred well defined characters living in my head. It isn’t easy keeping them quiet. Besides all of that, my wife was diagnosed with Breast Cancer right before Thanksgiving, and by the time this post is published, we will be well into her twenty weeks of Chemo.

Wish us luck in battle friends, and please keep reading (and listening) and sharing what you enjoy.

To enter to win, please send in your entries with the subject line "FANTASTICA" to FBCgiveaway@gmail.com. Contest will end on 29th February 12:01 PM.


OFFICIAL AUTHOR INFORMATION: M. R. Mathias lives on 5 wooded acres. Like the wizards of old, he tends to the animals who share that space and inspire the creatures in his works. He likes to deep sea fish, to attend sporting events, and genre/cosplay conventions. He has sold well over a million eBooks. His work is critically acclaimed, and he has won multiple literary awards, including a coveted Locus Poll nomination. You can follow him @DahgMahn on Twitter, Facebook, and Instagram
Tuesday, February 11, 2020

The Scaled Tartan by Raymond St. Elmo mini-review




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Monday, February 10, 2020

Cover Reveal Q&A: Of Honey And Wildfires by Sarah Chorn (by Mihir Wanchoo)


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Today we have the immense pleasure of hosting the cover reveal for Sarah Chorn’s upcoming standalone fantasy volume. Sarah’s debut Seraphina’s Lament was a particularly unique one with its magic system as well as its historical inspiration. Of Honey And Wildfires is an exciting new standalone story and Sarah was super kind to answer a few questions to talk about the world, the story and how Pen Astridge blew her cover expectations right out the gate…..

Q] Thank you for joining us, Sarah, and welcome to Fantasy Book Critic! It’s truly a pleasure for allowing us this opportunity to host this cover reveal. How have you been? 

SC: Oh, you know… kicking ass and taking names.

Q] Can you give us an idea of how Of Honey And Wildfires came to fruition? What was your inspiration for this story?

SC: I don’t ever really know how these things happen. I think it’s a mixture of me being weird and the books I read. I tend to only read historical nonfiction books when I’m editing. I kind of flit from subject to subject, whatever interests me at the time. At this specific time, I decided to read a bit on the Wild West. I started reading a book about the gold rush, and then moved on to the early oil industry and settlers and all this and it just kind of… came together from there, I guess. A secondary wild west-esque world started to develop in my mind, complete with corporate interest and battles over resource ownership and etc. Oil and coal became the jumping off point for my magic system. I read a book about Kit Carson, which inspired the development of Christopher Hobson in the book, and his daughter Cassandra was inspired by Kit’s eldest daughter named Adelaide… and here we are.

Q] I would love to hear more details on that gorgeous cover. Who's the artist/designer, and can you give us a little insight into the process for coming up with that incredible piece?

SC: Pen Astridge is the cover artist and the genius is really all hers. I’m pretty much the worst possible person to think of cover art ideas. I think I’m too close to the book, so I just can’t figure out what should go on the cover. For this one, when she asked for ideas or inspiration, I basically had nothing. “Uh… so it’s set in a sort of Wild West. The west has mountains and stuff… uh…” and then I let her run with it. I don’t know what kind of magic she uses to come up with this stuff, but that’s basically all I gave her and she bequeathed me with this beautiful cover. The woman is a wizard. I will never be able to praise her highly enough. I’m really glad she tolerates me.


Q] I believe Of Honey And Wildfires is set in a completely different world than your debut. What drove you to write a standalone story that’s not set in the same world as your debut?

SC: This one is a bit… awkward on my part, but I’ll be honest. Seraphina’s Lament was just so dark, I think I needed a mental break from that world and those characters before I could return to it. I needed a bit of a palate cleanser, if you will. This is a totally different world, and it’s sad and still has its own kind of darkness, but the writing of Seraphina’s Lament just about hollowed me out. I tried to start An Elegy For Hope (The Bloodlands, book 2) and I just… felt too bruised, I guess, so I figured maybe I needed to have this side project going on. A place where I can still tell stories, and explore themes and ideas, but ones that aren’t quite as “here, take my soul and flay it” as Seraphina’s Lament was for me to write.

Basically, I did this for my mental health. I can’t not tell stories. That being said, I needed a bit of a change of pace after Seraphina’s Lament and while this book literally made me sob while writing the last third of it, and I’ve read it and revised it a million times and have yet to make it through without ugly crying, it’s a very different kind of sadness, and there’s more hope here and I think that’s just really what I needed or I would have burned out.

Q] Was the writing process different with Of Honey and Wildfires and did you face any challenges with this genre shift?

SC: Yeah, so this one was a bit of a challenge. First, I’ve never written in first person POV before, and I’ve got two of them in this book, as well as a third person POV, and that was a bit of a challenge for me to wrap my head around. There were lots of, “Oh crap, this character is third person, not first person… REWRITE” moments.

Secondly, the book is set in this place called “Shine Territory” which is literally closed off from the rest of the world by this thing called the Boundary, and owned by an outside company. The development of a world in a closed system like this was something I thought would be easy, but ended up being a lot more challenging than I expected. Basically, there’s a whole bunch of people trapped in this one place, completely incapable to leave, at the mercy of outside interests and somehow, I had to figure out how life went on without the outside world touching this place and for whatever reason, it really tied me in knots at times. The outside world and this territory really had to touch JUST ENOUGH, and managing that balance was an experience.

Last, the magic system is… well, I tried to keep it a bit nebulous, for reasons which will become obvious in two of the POVs almost instantly, and that was hard as well. I wanted to lay out all the rules and say, “This is what “shine” is, and this is what it does, and here is why…” and I know people like their magic systems to be clearly defined, but I couldn’t do that because of (SPOILERS) so trying to toe that line between this magic system needing definition and rules and boundaries, and then trying to keep it sort of nebulous and undefined in some respects, was really a balancing act. I’m still not sure if I got it right.

(Wildfire picture credit: Patrick Orton, Getty Images)

Q] How did you come up with the title Of Honey and Wildfires? How does it tie with the plot of the book?

SC: This book is a lot of things (I think I’ve learned I tend to work in layers), but thematically, I think this book is an exploration of many different kinds of love. Sometimes love is sweet, sometimes it burns. We tend to think love means romance, but I think we forget, a lot of times, how much of a driving force love between siblings, friends, parents, etc. can be. Sometimes love feels a lot more like a knife. Sometimes the softest touch is the most painful. Sometimes it’s love that breaks you. I told a friend just today, “I kind of take the idea of love and say, ‘Look at how pretty this knife is. I wonder how well it cuts.’”

Anyway, there’s a quote I put on the first page of the book, which is where I actually got the title from. I think it kind of shows strength in ways that we don’t typically think of it (it’s also just a gorgeous quote) and I really think it fit the tone of the themes I was running with for the book. It is:

Just because you are soft does not mean you are not a force. Both honey and wildfire are the color gold.

- Victoria Erikson, Edge of Wonder: Notes on the Wildness of Being

Q] Your book has a real interesting magic system as you had mentioned your research on twitter. What can you reveal about the magic system that you have created? What are some of its unique features?

SC: I have a whole long blog post about this on my website. Basically, the magic system is inspired by oil and coal. Specifically, the mid-1800’s oil and coal industry. In the book, a bunch of settlers traveled west to try their luck out beyond the borders of the Union. One guy dug a well on his property, looking for water, and ended up striking shine.

Shine comes in oil or rock form (rock is more expensive, and lasts longer, but is harder to get and relies on child labor). Shine can be used for just about anything. If it’s rubbed on thread, the cloth that uses that thread will never tear. If it’s dabbed in a wound, the wound will heal faster. Put some in water, and it will cool or warm as you will it. Use shine rocks to light a fire, or shine oil in a lamp, and the flame will never flicker or go out. Three shine rocks can be used to power trains for years and years. Guns shoot shine, not bullets. Since this is a closed system, food has to cross the Boundary and is often rotten by the time it gets in, so shine rubbed on rotten food will bring it back to health and prolong its shelf life. On the flip side, there’s “shine addiction.” People who drink this stuff get addicted to it, totally strung out, and end up dying an early death. Think heroin.

A lot of this stuff is based in history. Oil actually WAS used as medicine. Coal was a fantastic find because it packed so much energy in those rocks. I just made my shine rocks, more powerful and last a whole lot longer. The oil and coal industry really drove technology forward in leaps and bounds, and I tried to take the essence of that, and the fight over control of the resources (corporate interest and the like), but sort of twisted it to be a bit more… mystical.

Q] What do you hope your readers take away from this book?

SC: I mean, I guess my minimum would be, “Wow, reading this book wasn’t a terrible experience.”

Q] Thank you again for taking the time to chat with us, Sarah. When can readers be able to read Of Honey And Wildfires? Anything else you have going on right now that you'd like the world to know about?

SC: I’m aiming for a March 31st release date right now. On the side, I’m starting to write An Elegy For Hope, which is the book after Seraphina’s Lament. I’m also writing Glass Rhapsody, which is the next (standalone) book set in this world.

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Pre-order Of Honey And Wildfires over HERE

OFFICIAL BOOK BLURB: From the moment the first settler dug a well and struck a lode of shine, the world changed. Now, everything revolves around that magical oil.

What began as a simple scouting expedition becomes a life-changing ordeal for Arlen Esco. The son of a powerful mogul, Arlen is kidnapped and forced to confront uncomfortable truths his father has kept hidden. In his hands lies a decision that will determine the fate of everyone he loves—and impact the lives of every person in Shine Territory.

The daughter of an infamous saboteur and outlaw, Cassandra has her own dangerous secrets to protect. When the lives of those she loves are threatened, she realizes that she is uniquely placed to change the balance of power in Shine Territory once and for all.

Secrets breed more secrets. Somehow, Arlen and Cassandra must find their own truths in the middle of a garden of lies.

Friday, February 7, 2020

A Prince of Song & Shade by Lisa Cassidy Review



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Tuesday, February 4, 2020

A Conjuring of Assassins by Cate Glass mini-review (reviewed by Łukasz Przywóski)



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Monday, February 3, 2020

SPFBO Finalist: A Tale of Stars and Shadow by Lisa Cassidy (reviewed by David Stewart, Justine Bergman, Lukasz Przywoski and Mihir Wanchoo)




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Saturday, February 1, 2020

SPFBO Interview Lisa Cassidy (interviewed by Łukasz Przywóski)



Friday, January 31, 2020

EXCLUSIVE COVER REVEAL & GUEST POST: Legacy of Bones (A Tale of Bone and Steel #1) by Kirk Dougal


When it comes to fantasy or science fiction, a believable world is just as important to a story as character development and plot. But while the action and characters are front and center for the reader to enjoy, the world is the stage on which they play. If the footing isn't solid, the story often stumbles and sputters, many times leaving the reader not understanding what is wrong, only that something is not right. At its worst, bad or inconsistent worldbuilding rips the story apart and leaves it unreadable.

We are all affected by what surrounds us. Our lives are shaped by the society where we live, the culture, the land, the economy, the political atmosphere, and a thousand other items. The characters and plots in stories should be the same.

With my epic fantasy series, A Tale of Bone and Steel, I began my worldbuilding with a rough sketch of a map with the different countries. With nine separate entities west of a mountain range that effectively cut the main land mass in two, why did seven of them feel very blended, including languages and customs? Why were the other two so drastically different in culture, religion, and political leadership?


The answer for me was a massive war that devastated huge parts of the population in the seven kingdoms, driving them together as refugees. The survivors spread out after the conflict was over, repopulating the deserted lands with many identical ideas and customs after living as one people for so long. The two that remained different had survived the war largely intact, one keeping a religion alive with no comparable worship customs. The other kingdom maintained a leadership hierarchy unlike any of the countries, including a banner showing a monk with a sword. Those decisions led to even more questions. Why did the monk have a sword? How does that banner reflect a more democratic society surrounded by lands led by kings and queens?

What about their economies? One of the kingdoms, from the royal palace to the lowest commoner, treated money as the most important issue in their lives. This was because their economy was the most devastated by the war and following generations remembered that time of rebuilding. Another kingdom vowed war would never affect them again and became isolationist while growing to be the largest supplier of weapons, making them friends on all sides. Two more countries, side by side on the map, struggled with each other in a big brother/little brother relationship, mired with jealousy and desire leading to a contentious state of affairs between them.

All these questions and answers added layers, and to a certain extent reality, to the story. It was not just enough for me to know the protagonist would have problems crossing the border between two certain countries. I needed the depth from knowing the decades of political, economic, or religious interactions that would make the travel difficult.


The same level of attention needed to be given to the magic system within the world as well. I remember reading C.S. Friedman's Coldfire Trilogy nearly thirty years ago. In it, she devised an explanation for where the power of her magic system was derived. I did the same thing in the Tale of Bone and Steel series. There is an explanation for why some people can wield magic and others cannot. I also placed natural limits on its use.

Early in the first book, I use an analogy to explain this to one of the characters. The way I saw the magic limitations was much the same as if someone today participated in weightlifting. A person who is not very strong in magic could improve their power through practice and pushing themselves with increasingly harder exercises, in essence, building their muscles. Some people may be naturally strong without the practice, but may improve even more dramatically with teaching. This is the same in the real world. To a few, the exercise comes easy, and their muscles react quickly. For others, all the time in the world spent on the bench press will never increase their strength.

At the same time in my story, if someone attempts to over train, they can pull their magic muscles or even tear them apart. If they go to the ultimate extreme and overexert themselves too much, their body may never fully recovery. I included these types of repercussions in the story, too.

Staying with the weightlifting example, I also took into account performance enhancing drugs like steroids. In the story world, there are ways to cheat, to get around the hard work involved with natural improvement. These were some of the most fun twists that I made as a part of the magic system.

So by the time I was done with all of this worldbuilding, I felt I had created many layers, a solid foundation to build upon for the story. But as an avid reader myself, nothing can be as off putting as a thousand words of explanation or page upon page of backstory in a never-ending info dump. Just because I had a page of notes stating why the monk was holding a sword does not mean the reason needed to be put verbatim into the story. Because I understand why Spirache and Lebesh will go to war over shipping lanes, the reader does not need to know until it is pertinent to a character or the plot. I attempted to show the world in necessary drips, allowing the reader to make discoveries along with the characters. It also allows for foreshadowing of events in later books.

In the end, that may be the most important thing to remember about sharing the world with readers. Yes, the world needs to be the firm stage on which to perform, but it is still the actors and the play that must take top billing.

(Cover design & typography by Shawn T. King)

Pre-order Legacy Of Bones over here

Kirk Dougal's first book in the A Tale of Bone and Steel series, “Legacy of Bones,” goes on sale on February 25, with “Black Shadow Rising” and “Wings of the Storm” following in three-week intervals. The series covers and interior layouts were created by Shawn King of STK Kreations.

Official Book Blurb: An ancient evil is waiting to be reborn...

One thousand years ago, Emperor Abaddon and his generals swept into the Western Kingdoms and unleashed death and destruction on the people. But ruling the world could not be accomplished until they destroyed the dragonlord and his followers, leaving themselves as the most powerful sagias alive.

The dragons and the eastern countries had other plans. Legendary beasts and men banded together in a suicide mission to stop the war, meeting them in a final battle where the emperor and the dragonlord were killed. The five surviving soldiers who fought beside the dragons became the Draig D'Alikar, a group of fighters with the legacy to protect the kingdoms by carrying the bones of the dragonlord as weapons against their enemies.

But now, a young woman has been found who could be a powerful enough sagia to help the emperor be reborn. Only her two brothers, one a recently liberated apprentice who has his own secret power, and the other a drunk still trying to forget their father's death, stand in the way of the generals bringing Emperor Abaddon back to life.

If only the emperor would remain dead, so all the other sagias could live.

Legacy of Bones is the first book in the A Tale of Bone and Steel series, an epic adventure filled with unforgettable characters, gritty action, and the future of the world hanging in the balance. If you like your epic fantasy mixed with a side order of grimdark, then this series is for you.

Wednesday, January 29, 2020

The Other People by C. J. Tudor (reviewed by Mihir Wanchoo)


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OFFICIAL AUTHOR INFORMATION: C. J. Tudor is the author of The Hiding Place and The Chalk Man, which won the International Thriller Writers Award for Best First Novel and the Strand Magazine Award for Best Debut Novel. Over the years she has worked as a copywriter, television presenter, voice-over artist, and dog walker. She is now thrilled to be able to write full-time, and doesn’t miss chasing wet dogs through muddy fields all that much. She lives in England with her partner and daughter.

OFFICIAL BOOK BLURB: She sleeps, a pale girl in a white room . . .

Three years ago, Gabe saw his daughter taken. In the back of a rusty old car, covered in bumper stickers. He was driving behind the car. He watched her disappear. But no one believes him. Most people believe that his daughter, and wife, are dead. For a while, people believed that Gabe was responsible.

Three years later and Gabe cannot give up hope. Even though he has given up everything else. His home, his job, his old life. He spends his days and nights travelling up and down the motorway, sleeping in his camper van in service stations, searching for the car that took her. Searching for his daughter.

Katie spends a lot of her life in service stations, working as a waitress. She often sees Gabriel, or 'the thin man' as she has nicknamed him. She knows his story. She feels for him, because Katie understands what it's like to lose a loved one. Nine years ago, her father was murdered. It broke her family apart. She hasn't seen her oldest sister since the day of the funeral; the day she did something terrible.

Fran and her daughter, Alice, put in a lot of miles on the motorway. Not searching. But running. Trying to keep one step ahead of the people that want to hurt them. Because Fran knows the truth. She knows what really happened to Gabe's daughter. She knows who is responsible. And she knows that if they ever find them, they're dead.

FORMAT/INFO: January 28, 2020 marks the North American hardcover and e-book publication of The Other People via Ballantine Books. It’s 336 pages long divided over sixty-four chapters with a prologue and an epilogue. It was also published in the UK on 23rd January 2020 by Michael Joseph Ltd. Publishing.


OVERVIEW/ANALYSIS The Other People was a book that was highly anticipated by me. After reading CJ’s debut The Chalk Man. I was very excited by her style of thrillers and the supernatural angle she inserts into the story.

With The Other People, we get a standalone story that deals with loss of a loved one, grief that follows and the rage that remains. Gabe is one such a person who has experienced a unfathomable loss. His wife and five year old daughter were murdered but Gabe insists that he saw his daughter in a beat up car just before he arrived home. Three years later and Gabe is still searching for his daughter and now he’s lonely and desperate to find any clue or resemblance of one to maintain his resolve and sanity. The second character whom we meet is Katie, a waitress who notices Gabe and wishes he finds what he’s looking for. She’s a single mother who’s strapped for money and time, lastly there’s Fran and Alice who are running from someone or something. Then there’s the Samaritan who as a character inspite of his name, is deeply terrifying.

This is a story that deeply hinges on one of the most thrilling concepts that I’ve read and it does its job spectacularly well. The story is all about mysteries, what really happened to Gabe’s family? Who are Fran and Alice running from? What’s the Samaritan’s secret? And lastly who are the titular characters of this story?

All of these mysteries and more are thoroughly populated within the story. The reader will be forced to go along and try to figure them out quickly but as one unspools, another takes its place and so it continues. The characters are well drawn out and all of them have been bogged down by life in general. But they are charismatic in their own way and we are drawn to them and willingly follow them down the rabbit hole that is the main plot thread. I loved this aspect of the story wherein I wasn’t quite sure of what was truly happening.

Yes it absolutely all makes sense and in grounded in the world that we live in and know. But there’s just a small tickle of something paranormal that’s a bit hard to explain and which makes the story that much more exciting and terrifying all the same. The pace of the story unlike a thriller isn’t rollicking all the way through, but believe me you won’t be able to stop as each new mystery and plot wrinkle unfolds. CJ Tudor is an absolute master in twisting readers’ minds with her precise words and enticing scenarios. She knows exactly which mental buttons will make us sit up and gasp in terror. This terror, I want to clarify is the subtle kind and it creeps up on you far quicker than you can imagine. It’s also deadlier than the gore kind and it absolutely dominates during certain parts of the story.

For me, this read was a terrific and terrifying one thanks to its main mystery and the author’s masterful execution of the plot. I don’t think there ever will be a sequel to this story but the world introduced within might be one that readers will feel like visiting again. Especially if we can get to know more about the Samaritan and whatever it is that motivates him. There’s no other issues for me in this book.

CONCLUSION: Terrifying, taut and incredibly mysterious, The Other People is CJ Tudor’s proclamation to the mystery genre about her presence. Plus what a presence it is, rivaling Stephen King’s earlier work with its tinge of cerebral horror and masterful suspense. The Other People is a book that should fare extremely well for anyone who loves to read a mysterious book about loss, grief and the rage of a loved one.

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